🗣️ 스픽 🗣️E-sports 찬성 반대 📝 Actually, I fully agree that the popularity of video games is very beneficial for us and other countries. However, I'm very pessimistic about eSports being included in the Olympics as a sport.불필요한 반복을 줄이고, "but" 대신 "however"를 사용해서 더 매끄럽게 연결했어요. “being one of the games for sports, just sports, Olympics” 대신 더 명확하게 "being included in the Olympics as a sport"라고 했어요. 🤖 I ..