39일차. 2023-12-22. 스픽 - AI 튜터

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E-sports 찬성 반대

 

📝 Actually, I fully agree that the popularity of video games is very beneficial for us and other countries. However, I'm very pessimistic about eSports being included in the Olympics as a sport.

불필요한 반복을 줄이고, "but" 대신 "however"를 사용해서 더 매끄럽게 연결했어요. “being one of the games for sports, just sports, Olympics” 대신 더 명확하게 "being included in the Olympics as a sport"라고 했어요.

 

🤖 I see. Traditional sports are accessible to everyone, while e-sports are tied to intellectual property.

 

📝 For example, if you are a shooter, you don't need to pay any royalties to the creator or inventor of the sport. However, in eSports, like Fortnite, you have to pay royalties to the game creator or developer if you participate in an eSports Olympics.

더 간결하고 자연스러운 문장으로 만들어졌어요. "shooting player" 대신 "shooter"가 더 일반적인 표현이고, "loyalty" 대신 "royalties"가 맞는 단어예요.

 

🤖 I understand what you're saying. Traditional sports emphasize inclusivity and the spirit of enjoyment among all participants, while e-sports may not promote the same level of interpersonal interaction.

 

🤖 Traditional sports have stable rules, while e-sports may undergo frequent updates and changes, making it challenging to adapt.

 

🤖 That's true, e-sports players need to adapt to updates and patches released by game developers in order to stay competitive. It requires constant flexibility and learning.

 

📝 Yeah, but you know, an e-sports player usually gets used to one character or skill. However, depending on the updates or frequency of patches, they have to constantly change their gameplay style or skills, which is a difficult task. Due to patches, a player who was a loser could become top-notch, and vice versa.

긴 문장을 짧고 명확하게 나누어서 전달력이 높아졌어요. "noisy task" 대신 "difficult task"로 더 자연스럽게 표현했어요.

 

📝 Also, there is another loophole in e-sports authorities. Compared to traditional sports, there are no impactful governing bodies to encompass e-sports players and regulations.

“compared to just traditional sports”에서 “just”는 불필요하고, “game”을 빼는 게 더 자연스러워요. “in”을 써서 “loophole”의 위치를 명확히 하고, “there is”를 “there are”로 바꿔서 복수형에 맞게 고쳤어요.

 

🤖 That's a valid point. E-sports lacks a centralized governing body like traditional sports, which can create challenges in terms of standardization and regulation.

 

📝 In order to ensure fairness, there could be some players who use bugs or exploit skills illegally.

문장을 간결하게 정리했고, "seek the fairness"보다 "ensure fairness"가 더 자연스러워요. 또 "illegal players" 대신 "players who use bugs or exploit skills illegally"라고 하여 더 명확하게 표현했어요.

 

🤖 I understand your concern. The presence of bugs or exploits in e-sports can compromise fairness and create an unfair advantage for certain players.

 

🤖 Bugs and unfair advantages can create a disparity between fair and unfair players, affecting important matches like the gold medal game.

 

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