36일차. 2023-12-19. 스픽 - AI 튜터

📝: Okay, so last week, I realized that my annual subscription to Speak was automatically renewed. I wanted to downgrade the service from Premium Plus to just Premium. Thank you.

*더 자연스럽게 들리기 위해 "level down" 대신 "downgrade"를 사용하고, 서비스 이름을 명확히 하기 위해 대문자로 시작했어요.

 

📝: Perhaps it is due to the study members or the concept of that study group. Actually, that study group is named Qualcomm, so I believe most of the members are not earnest about studying in an academic way.

*"attributable to" 대신 "due to"가 더 자연스럽고, "learn study in academic way"보다 "studying in an academic way"가 더 명확한 표현이에요.

 

📝: The Qualcomm group's concept is to communicate with people casually. I don't like casual talks or discussions; I prefer more productive study sessions. I also like to practice and improve my structured sentences.

*더 간결하게 표현해서 이해하기 쉽게 만들었어요. "But the thing is"와 같은 불필요한 부분을 제거하고, 문장을 짧고 명확하게 썼어요.