27일차. 2023-12-11. 스픽 - AI 튜터

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📝 I have observed many people attending social gatherings, particularly study groups, claiming they want to improve their English speaking skills. However, I don't think their efforts match what they say.

*문장을 간결하게 만들고, 헷갈리는 부분을 명확하게 표현하세요. 또한, 문법적으로 맞지 않는 부분을 고쳐서 전체적으로 말이 더 자연스럽게 흐르게 했습니다.

 

I've noticed many people attending these social gatherings, like study groups, to improve their English speaking skills. However, their efforts don't match what they say.

 

📝 What I mean is that they often claim they want to attend these study groups to improve their speaking skills, but it seems like a superficial reason for their presence, especially in a study group context.

(내 말은 그들이 말하기 능력을 향상시키기 위해 이러한 스터디 그룹에 참석하고 싶다고 종종 주장하지만, 특히 스터디 그룹 상황에서 그것은 그들이 참석하는 피상적인 이유처럼 보인다는 것입니다.)

*문장을 조금 더 명확하게 만들었어요. "Ostensible"이라는 단어를 사용하면 '겉보기에는 그럴듯한'이라는 뜻으로 말할 수 있고, 이 문맥에서는 'superficial'이라는 단어가 더 자연스러워요. "So"와 "I mean"을 너무 자주 쓰지 않도록 해요.

 

I understand. So, you mean that they often give the excuse of wanting to improve their speaking skills as a cover-up, especially in study groups.

 

📝 Just because people attend a study group doesn't mean they will improve their speaking skills. Instead, apart from attending study groups, they should dedicate time to self-study. They need to set aside time specifically for learning English, separate from the regular study group sessions.

*"Study group" 앞에 정관사 'a'를 붙여서 '하나의 스터디 그룹'임을 명확히 해주고, 'improve' 뒤에 'will'을 사용해서 미래 가능성을 나타내줬어요. 문장을 좀 더 명확하게 하려고 "Rather than it" 대신 "Instead"를 썼고, "set some amount of time" 대신 "dedicate time"이라고 표현해서 학습에 시간을 할애해야 한다는 점을 강조했어요.

 

I agree, attending study groups alone may not be enough to improve speaking skills. Setting aside dedicated time for self-study is essential for language development.

 

📝 That's why I think most people attending study groups seem to have a misunderstanding

*"most of people" 대신에 "most people"이라고 해야 자연스럽고, "looks like having" 보다는 "seem to have"가 더 맞는 표현이에요.

 

So, you believe that many people attending study groups have a misunderstanding about the effectiveness of these groups for improving their speaking skills.

 

*별첨.

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