33일차. 2023-12-16. 스픽 - AI 튜터

🗣 스픽 🗣

 

📝 This test is an abbreviation for Advanced Data Analytics Semi-Professional. That's what people usually call it. When I was studying for the ADSP, I gained fundamental knowledge about data, big data, and artificial intelligence, and learned which formulas and activations are applied in these mechanisms.

*설명을 간결하게 정리해 주고, 불필요하게 반복되는 말을 빼서 훨씬 자연스럽고 이해하기 쉬운 문장으로 만들었어요. "abbreviation word of" 대신 "abbreviation for"라고 사용하는 것이 맞는 표현이고, "I have had"는 시제가 복잡해서 "I gained"으로 간단하게 바꿨어요.

 

📝 Because it might sound quite technical and potentially boring, I'll keep it simple. The main point I want to emphasize is that I have the foundational knowledge to understand current trends, such as AI, big data, and SQL, among other things.

*긴 문장을 더 간결하고 명확하게 표현해 보세요. "uh"나 "anyway" 같은 말은 생략해도 돼요. 전문 용어나 기술적인 내용을 설명할 땐 간단하고 직접적으로 말하는 것이 좋아요.

 

🤖 How do you plan to apply this knowledge in your future endeavors?

 

🤖: Excel offers features like data validation, conditional formatting, and pivot tables to efficiently manage and analyze your data.

 

📝: However, what I'm trying to say is that before inputting your data into Excel, you need to consider how to format the spreadsheet. For instance, you should decide what to enter into each row, such as product, price, period, and month. Similarly, you need to determine what to input into each column, like the maker's name, model name, model number, and the net or unit price. It's important to think about the necessary X and Y axes for your data.

*문장을 더 명확하게 만들었어요. 예를 들어서 설명하는 부분을 간결하게 정리하고, "생각하다"를 영어로 "think over"보다는 "consider"로 표현하는 게 자연스러워요.

 

📝: Perhaps I should clarify that the X-axis represents the independent variable or parameter, and the Y-axis represents the dependent variable or parameter.

*'individual'과 'subordinating' 보다는 'independent' (독립 변수)와 'dependent' (종속 변수)라는 용어가 통계나 과학에서 더 정확하고 일반적으로 사용되는 표현이에요.

 

📝: That's all for now. I would like to have transition to another topic. I am planning to learn about economics, global issues, and current events. Up until this point, my learning has been focused on professional self-development. However, I now feel the need to acquire knowledge in other areas, such as improving my personal life.

*"Move naturally"라는 표현은 조금 어색해요. "Transition"을 사용하면 더 자연스러워요. 그리고 마지막 부분에서 "life-wise"라는 말을 "improving my personal life"라고 바꾸면 무슨 말인지 더 명확하게 전달돼요.

 

📝: Thank you for listening to me and for sharing your thoughts as well.

*"and then"은 순서를 나타낼 때 쓰는 말인데 여기서는 필요하지 않아요. 그냥 "and"만 사용하면 자연스럽습니다.

 

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